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This hand has killed,
This hand has loved.
  This hand has praised,
  Heavens Above.
This hand is mine,
This hand is yours.
  This hand has got
  Reprehensible Force.
This hand denies,
This hand implies.
  This hand tells
  Itself Lies.
This hand is guilty,
This hand is innocent.
  This hand will rule with
  Dark Omnipotence.
I love this hand,
I loathe this hand.
  But in the end it is
  My Hand.
©2004-2009 ~maggotakame
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A poem, not strictly free verse, but nearly. Please don't read too deeply into this.

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:iconphoenix18:
I love this except for the fact that trying to rhyme omnipotence and innocent is quite a stretch, maybe if you said something like,

"This hand will rule
Dark and Omnipotent" instead.

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No his mind is not for rent, to any god or government. Always hopeful yet discontent. He knows changes aren't permanent, but change is.
:iconmaggotakame:
Yeah, that sounds a lot better. be prepared for an update. lol.

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:iconangel-from-your-nigh:
it sounds awsome. reminds me of that movie Idol Hands. :)
:iconmaggotakame:
Can't say I've seen it. Is it fairly old?

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:iconangel-from-your-nigh:
yeah it is. like made in the late 90's.... i do believe... :)
:iconmaggotakame:
I'll look out for it. Thanks.

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:iconmaggotsrus:
that is not the only thing that hand has done... lol
:iconmaggotakame:
True, but these are the only things that I'm willing to share ;)

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